Hi Dùlin! Figured I'd give this unanon because it's small.
Often times, I've noticed you tagging into posts with both Hinata or Unohana merely saying the person's name as a question (ex. "Fran-san?" as the tag). I know that Hinata is a shy character, and of course she would be hesitant to say something at first. But it gets hard to think up replies to that tag that aren't something like "Yes?" or "What is it?" when there's no description of her thoughts, expression, or emotions behind those words- it's hard to get a reading on her tone, you know? Especially when it's a post that could inspire many different feelings.
It's just a small thing. I really do enjoy playing with you. :Db
I'll admit that on some cases, I'm probably being a bit hasty because I want to reply but I'm not sure when I'll have the time to write something long, so I just rush. I'll definitely be thinking about fleshing out this first tag more.
Do you mind if I unscreen this? It's screened by default of course, but I've been thinking of unscreening them if the person giving the crit agrees so that people can see what parts have been given crit already.
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Date: 2012-03-10 01:57 am (UTC)Often times, I've noticed you tagging into posts with both Hinata or Unohana merely saying the person's name as a question (ex. "Fran-san?" as the tag). I know that Hinata is a shy character, and of course she would be hesitant to say something at first. But it gets hard to think up replies to that tag that aren't something like "Yes?" or "What is it?" when there's no description of her thoughts, expression, or emotions behind those words- it's hard to get a reading on her tone, you know? Especially when it's a post that could inspire many different feelings.
It's just a small thing. I really do enjoy playing with you. :Db
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Date: 2012-03-10 06:16 am (UTC)I'll admit that on some cases, I'm probably being a bit hasty because I want to reply but I'm not sure when I'll have the time to write something long, so I just rush. I'll definitely be thinking about fleshing out this first tag more.
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Date: 2012-03-10 08:19 am (UTC)Don't worry about having to rush tags. We're always willing to wait and backtag with you. --b
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Date: 2012-03-10 11:38 am (UTC)Do you mind if I unscreen this? It's screened by default of course, but I've been thinking of unscreening them if the person giving the crit agrees so that people can see what parts have been given crit already.
Just let me know!
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Date: 2012-03-10 08:56 pm (UTC)